Haiku -The Darkness, The Light

Solar Eclipse 5/20 - #4

Hinode Observes 2011 Annular Solar Eclipse

My dance was awesome
A mad hot jig on hot slime
Dance in a dark flame


From beyond the seen
The life of the Supreme Being
Quench the dark within


As I fly higher
With each air I inspire
Life will shine brighter

6 responses to “Haiku -The Darkness, The Light

  1. That is probably the best haiku I have ever read. Love the imagery.

    • realityenchanted

      Hearing this about my first haiku ever sure makes me glad.
      Happier though that you could connect with the imagery.

  2. Great article. Thank you to tell us more useful information. I am looking forward to reading more of your articles in the future.

  3. I’m not really into poetry, but I love the feel of your words in my mind.

Even the most absurd thoughts can't ruffle this Enchanted Writer. Spill, please...

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